Far too pretenious for me
Reviews for "You Think ALS is Funny?"
I think so, ALS isn't funny ¬¬
Why is it that over half the people below me are so stupid, that they can't understand what you were trying to say? It wasn't very hard to grasp. I mean, it was simple really. You were explaining how people don't take the Ice Bucket Challenge for what it really is, and are just doing it because it's some "fad."
It's not. It's serious. And people need to stop making it seem so funny and mainstream.
And seriously, why can't the guys below me understand what you were doing here? I have a feeling they just wrote the review before even finishing the flash, rather than listening to it in full, then letting it sink in for a moment.
Overall, pretty great job. Good animation, voice acting could have used variation, but I barely even took notice. Amazing message as well. I like it! ^~^
Truth been told I was aware to spill some shit, cause I really thought it would be a totally different kind of flash.
But kinda glad I do not have to, for the flash, the animation was ok for the purpose, not to shabby, not to fancy either, voice acting as one stated before, maybe an second voicer, but for the length of the flash and the meaning of it, it's okey just have it done by one person.
For the meaning, would rather have him stare straight at the viewer in the end, asking "What's ALS anyways?"
Really hope that some more will try to understand what the IBC is about, after seeing the flash, and not just keep going on like woohoo let's do it cuz it's fun, believe most people do not even know, that they would have to spend for the reasearch, if they do not bucket themselfs after nomination...
I think some of us just got a little miffed when someone made fun of the "ice bucket challenge".
I don't think you meant to actually make fun of those who want to raise awareness for ALS, did you Helloutcry? I got it, though. Sometimes, social media makes us miss the point of why we do these things, to raise awareness. Pay attention to the last line "What's an ALS?"
Anyway, pretty decent writing. My only criticism is the two characters sound exactly the same. Now, voice acting isn't easy, at all and I'm not saying the voice acting was bad, in any way, it's just that we could have used, I don't know, a different sounding person for the guy on the left. Maybe someone sounding dumber or something. I think Mr.Sran should have just voiced the guy on the left and someone else could have done the guy for the voice on the right.
Anyway, very nice, fellas. I liked it.
Keep up the good work.
helloutcry responds:
Exactly. You're a genius critic, and a very good observer. Good For you. tnx for the review.