it's a great music but i think you have to work more on the singing parts the singer is great but the part when you 'cut' is not excelent for a good exemple you have the music of DJ Babokon - Rising Waves RMK http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/377036 (2:07 to 3:00) i hope you gonna make more of it cause the beat it's really good :-D
good luck for the next !!