nice animation.. rather short though..
nice animation.. rather short though..
art's really good. lips seemed a little off though.
you need to turn your fps down, and work on your lip sync, and script
Your art style is very fascinating to look at, but the bland script and poor lip syncs make the overall cartoon unappealing and distasteful to watch. I suggest spending more time doing lip syncing since the syncing now ruins the over exaggerated style and feel you're no doubt trying to go for.
The script could really use some work. This idea has been a cliche for years, and you didn't really do anything that made this unique from all the other animations and videos that have been created before.
I give your animation 3 stars for the effort you put into this and the voice acting. Best wishes on your next project.
Good animations and voice acting. But damn whas this all ? No story ore humor, can't buy this.