I like the animation and the story was cute, but I honestly kind of kept wanting the music to stop, and it kept me from fully enjoying your work.
I like the animation and the story was cute, but I honestly kind of kept wanting the music to stop, and it kept me from fully enjoying your work.
Pretty good. The tune was good but not very catchy or memorable. I liked the animation style a lot! Whether it was intentional I kind of like the skippyness of it. In any other animation this may have been a problem but it works here. The overall concept isn't very original but neither is 80% of newgrounds. So I can't hold that against you. My biggest recommendation is working on the song. But besides that, this was fairly good.
When i was nine everyone made fun of me in school,I really felt bad.....
The animation was great but the song was awful. The lyrics were not great either. I could see what it was trying to do but it failed in my eyes,
This is horrible. Why god WHY?!? I actually logged in to write this...
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