Overall it's OK, but...
Your character doesn't have a background,
The angle and Devil things aren't explained,
The animation is a bit slow (understatement),
He beat a giant boar with the wind off his blade... that's a bit overpowered for just starting off, and
I think your character is a Marty Stew.
4,5 Stars.
Allow me to explain.
I thought the artwork in this video was great, loved the scene's you made up and the story overall.
Its just that, had you worked on this just another day, i feel that you could have smoothed out the animation. Wich would have made this so much easier to watch.
Although i liked it, i think it was to slow paced, and that goes especially for the fighting scene.
Well, Best of luck!
And im hoping to see more of your work in the future!
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Very good animation amazing background work and I really love the characters. Just need to increase the frame rate a bitas I felt some parts were too slow. Definitely worth the front page. Looking forward to more from you :)
Well, the story was nice and it have a good artstyle. I give you credit in what you made but there a couple of things that I would point out.
The animation was too slow, almost every movemente where at the same speed, and that could make some lose of impact, some actions like when he hit the boar and the faeris hit the snake should be faster to give it more impact.
I like the story (or at least the idea of it) but I think that it could turn out better if you don't tell that it's a game until the end, that could leave some sense of surprise.
beside of that, I think that it work pretty well, nice job.
Really nice style you got there, it flowed amazingly well. Very nostalgia for me.