Too short in my opinion and you should work on increasing the frame rate. It just needs a lot more frames in general. The motions aren't smoothed out at all and the action was short lived. However, it's worth working on. I haven't seen a decent new one of these for a while so if you can consider this a rough draft and get to expanding it into something much more drawn out and polished up, I could see this coming up as a nice little vid.
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pivot? -.-