Pivot isn't bad at all, try to take more practice 3 stars.
Reviews for "Student&master"
Not the best transitioning! But i really love the bow he take at the end! ahahahhahahahah made me crack up! if you add some music would make it all the better! But keep it up! Was pretty entertaining!
The soundtrack is taken from somewhere...and the intro is awful. You should probably cite the sources for your music. The animation is half decent, although it looks like it was made in a 2-bit stick animation program. Not sure what to say. Umm...try harder? Well, taking into account this is your second animation, I'd say it's ok. But I'd practice a bit more without uploading before putting the show on the road. Good day sir.
amateur once again made game , i can see that it was made with a stick moving program and was recorded , but its not bad , you just try to make less instant stick move , to make it more realistic , perhaps the music is good , but i think it is from one game , because i think i heard that in another site...
Props for smooth animation and well executed concept.
I would encourage you to slow it down, and polish the animation.
Wouldn't hurt if it were longer too.
Good effort, but there is much room to improve.