Reviews for Picture Frame

[justinjj1280]

Okay, it's really short and takes about 5 minutes to play. But, I really dig the creative concept and the story.

LukeElchul responds:

Thanks

[Reddemon4444]

I'm actually looking forward to the next one, for a 4 hour job you did good. If you do make another defintly work on it more and make it longer ^_^

LukeElchul responds:

Ye I will :)

[Hemda]

meh

LukeElchul responds:

Mi meh

[Gabriekk]

It's somehow deep and intriguing. Not the best story, but I really liked it and had a good feeling through the game.

LukeElchul responds:

Thanks :)

[Ietla]

I understand that this was made very quickly, but the quality was sadly poor.

First off I have generally bad eyesight, but someone with perfect vision wouldn't have been able to see that tiny character moving along. The lines that make up this character need to be bolder, more catching to the eye so that the player isn't leaning forward in their seat, nose pressed against their monitor trying to see where they're going.

Secondly I understand that again, you made this quickly, but the dialogue was a little laughable. If it's supposed to be silly make it silly, to me it seemed like you were trying to be earnest but it just came across as a poor attempt.

Lastly it's a good concept, don't give up on it, I think it just needs a lot more time and a lot more effort. With a little bit of a push this can be something wonderful.

LukeElchul responds:

Yea thank you I will take what you said in consideration when I make the second one, I maid it quick so I could get a response to my idea. Now I can look for animators and expand on it