The animation was pretty decent, the mouths could use some more frames and shapes. You did animate it well, but the joke and its voice acting weren´t good. Also the Korin Tower looked a bit flat.
It´s an average work, but you can improve. I suggest you focus more on the drawing and leave the voice acting to someone else.
Reviews for "Dragon Ball - Korin Tower"
not if I'm going deaf or is that the video is muted by default
HDRevill responds:
Read the description...
Ok, but volume needs fix. it failed about half way
>Kamay ah may ahhh
This is awful, sorry to say. Traced stuff, no action, and a punchline that falls flat on its face.
HDRevill responds:
It's bad but i didn't trace it haha