the art looks good, but this video looks so...rushed. do not rush anything, not even the kickstarter-videos or any other future work. i am not an animator, but i write stories and poems (only as a hobby) so i know how it is when you get kissed by a muse. take your time.
Reviews for "The Reward - The Desert"
I am a little dissapointed with the difference in quality. However I hope to see more in this series, and am also hoping that you will continue to make smoother animations, sense "The Reward" was so good. I love the characters and am looking foward to development.
TalesofAlethrion responds:
This is not an animation though. this is an animatic :) we only used one day on this, and the smooth Reward style is getting made on the real series. This was just a little treat we made in our sparetime ;)
I wish you had waited to release this...You'd have been better of not making this or just finishing it because this way you damaged your reputation by releasing this rushed video after your awesome first vid...
Love it...since this is an animatic, it would be totally unfair to rate this as high as your other animation. I look forward to your future works. Followed!
The muteness of the main characters is signature to them...but other (but not many) characters in the series when finished would benefit from voices to make the world seem alive without wasting time away from the story...
Regardless...I can't wait for it to be finished...