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Reviews for "The Reward - The Desert"
You need to work on the animation. I know it's a rought draft, but I thought I'd let you know. The music, which was the only thing that looked like that a lot of effort was put into it, was really good. There was no definitive plot to complain about, the animation cannot be poked at because you said that it's a rough draft, but word to the wise: Put more time into it, if you want it to be as good as the original video.
Even though this is composed mostly of still pictures and smooth camera transitions, it looks good. the musical composition makes it all the more intriguing. This series promises great things. I'm looking forward to it!
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I love how everyone's literally tripping out over the loss of animation fluidity as if you both all-of-the-sudden lost your animation skill. It's not like you VERY specifically said this was a rough draft and it was done in one day... Seriously, sometimes I can't tell if people are stupid or just ignorant. Regardless, the artwork and plot is phenomenal. I, at least, still think you guys are headed in the right direction and can't wait to see everything finished. Anyone who says you ruined your reputation it utterly ridiculous, if anything the fact that they took time out of their day to say that means they were expecting something from you and something tells me 99% of the people talking shit will click on the next video of yours that pops up. Why? Because you're truly talented. People just can't appreciate concepts, I suppose. Everything's gotta be polished and shiny like the first. I'm sure when this is finished it'll be a gem, and I'll be waiting. Just like everyone who had bad things to say and big egos to impose.
TalesofAlethrion responds:
Thanks for you comment :) As you say yourself, one day is not a lot to do this in. It is not a part of the series, but a fun little side thing we did. The series are going to be really awesome! Actually, this is how animations start. When you have this ready, you can just put animation rough line, keys, color, backgrounds and then compositing. The next episode has a very cool story that fits with the original film The Reward :)
look at that quality