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Reviews for "Episode one"

Whatha bwa? A female, skilled animator who is also a D&D fan?!

Preposterous!

Four stars for voice acting, length and some of the animation being truly beautiful

Sadly, the bad microphone and sometimes rather ugly animation frames limit this to four stars.

littlegoblet responds:

wow thanx buddy. yeah I still got smooth out my sound problems. lol I don't really have a good ear for that kind of stuff. These are things I will try to improve with my next installment :D

Cool i liked it well done!

littlegoblet responds:

thanx buddy. but your animations are awesome I enjoyed the movie with the little insect lol. will you be making more?

Good i like it, keep doing more and it will be better.

littlegoblet responds:

thanx buddy I will certainly try :D

Very well done, the animation is very smooth (the horse-man standing up right before he transforms is perfect) but also has a few choppy moments (when the camera zooms into her face when she hairs the horses), also it kind of cuts off abruptly, I realize this is only part one of a series but without the other parts this didn't really offer much story wise, so the animation was really the only thing I can possibly say I'm impressed by. Also, the female voice actor was kind of monotone, but I guess that might be what you were going for to make it, um, elf-style lol, and the mic was pretty low quality too, also, since the music was so good during the intro I was disappointed that there was pretty much none at all during the action sequence. I think you're great at animation and drawing, there's just some fundamental stuff you need to improve on in creating a movie in general, like story structure and framing characters within the camera properly, the kind of stuff directors need to learn.

littlegoblet responds:

thanks for the insightful comment buddy. I'm really glad you liked the music at the beginning and I know what you mean about not having much of it through out the animation. I actually struggled with choosing what parts to use too.

Xullrae is a very calm and confident character and it comes out a bit in her voice, but I hope the audience will see more emotion in her as the series continues :)