Very well done, the animation is very smooth (the horse-man standing up right before he transforms is perfect) but also has a few choppy moments (when the camera zooms into her face when she hairs the horses), also it kind of cuts off abruptly, I realize this is only part one of a series but without the other parts this didn't really offer much story wise, so the animation was really the only thing I can possibly say I'm impressed by. Also, the female voice actor was kind of monotone, but I guess that might be what you were going for to make it, um, elf-style lol, and the mic was pretty low quality too, also, since the music was so good during the intro I was disappointed that there was pretty much none at all during the action sequence. I think you're great at animation and drawing, there's just some fundamental stuff you need to improve on in creating a movie in general, like story structure and framing characters within the camera properly, the kind of stuff directors need to learn.