Overall I thought this was a pretty well thought out collab. I do have some minor critiques that I would like to add to make the next one in the series even better.
1. Smoother music- If you intend for the audience members to actually fap to this movie (trust me, many will) then you need to have a bit more mellow tunes. May I suggest some soft instrumental music with perhaps a bit of saxophone thrown in for true fapping capabilities.
2. More Animation- If the average joe wants to do fapping to pictures, he is so inclined to go on the internet and find pictures himself. If you threw in some rather quick and tawdry animations I think it would really give the whole project a deeper level.
3. Less Poop- Now I am a fan of poop just as much as the next pervert, but there is such a thing as too much poop.
Overall, this was truly awe inspiring and pretty fap worthy.