It's not actually a BAD creation, not as such. The idea is good, the general atmosphere comes across effectively, and the animation is solid. However, I do kind of feel that if this was what you were going for, maybe you should just have gone the whole way and made a movie out of it. It's either that, or make it possible to at least have some interaction with the environment. You know, being able to read a note, or look out through the window... simple stuff like that. Perhaps you could even add a possibility to pick up the crying baby or something, just so the player have some feeling of being in control of what happens.
Still, three stars for the animation, and emotional potential.