That was great but I don't like how it said "now that I can't turn back" because people can always turn back. People only make the illusion that they can't. It's better to say that people are not willing to live with the consequences (consequences are not always bad!) if they decide to go back. I personally believe we have free will but it is "limited" (to what extent is up to the individual). What I didn't like is that if the man tries to live on, it doesn't show what he does with his "guilt." Does he kill more girls or does he tries to redeem himself.? I believe that there is always redemption for anyone. We may not be able to fully wash away the guilt but that doesn't mean we give up and kill ourselves for it. People have to "man" up and try to do good in the world and try to make up for their mistakes in any way they can. People shouldn't take the easy way out, as rappers say "that shits for bitches"