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Reviews for "Lazy Writing 5"

The animation was good, but the writing sounded kind of lazy.

The radio DJ sounded exactly like the ones on NPR. I guess the interracial joke station is also for pompous snobs.

Awesome! And the end made it even better!!

@Neophyte-Ronin
I think that you're reading into it a bit too much. Don't worry, I do the same thing a lot, as I have a psychology teacher who gets stresses the importance of finding the hidden meaning of things; such thinking may have applied to this bit of animation had a few thing been changed.

The humor in the first skit (and to a greater extent all of Lazy Writing) sets up the expectations of the story, and thus clashes with the out of context ending, which ends up leaving the viewer thinking "what the fuck?". As such, I think that the ending should have been better placed somewhere else than in this flash, and maybe without having the conversation between the teacher and the kid being so silly. As such, I give it an 8.5/10, demonstrating something that is worth watching, but needs improvement as far as the goal of the flash.

I liked it, alot. It's one of those "Its funny because its true" laughs. Keep up the good work mate!