I think that your drawings and animation are both fluid and beautiful, just that the voices need work. I think you could make one of the best series on NG ever if you tried :D.
Reviews for "Lazy Writing 5"
ya the ending was kinda random, but wat eva still good
If, by "lost it", you mean gone insane, that is what happened. What I didn't like about this was that the first segment didn't seem that good. You did, however, really make up for it for the next cartoon. It was unbelievable because I had absolutely had idea what was going to happen next. I was thinking it was going to be some kind on stage or something. Even when he came out, I had no idea he would kill a baby. Maybe that baby has something to do with tying shoes?
This is just such a demented cartoon I have no choice but to recommend it. The animation is as good as ever. I really love how these cartoons are so good with putting their expressions on screen. The voices are perfectly suited as well. It's a good thing the second segment was longer, you should have just not put in that first segment at all.
"I've lost it towards the end" You sure did
why??!!? why would u do that>??