Would've been better if it was unscripted. Sari's lines sound contrived and unnatural, and it comes across as more annoying than funny. If she independently decided to critique your stuff then this would be good, but otherwise it's not worth making.
Edit Sep 4, 2020: Gosh I sure was mean back then. I've improved my review score. Really great job with this.
Great work. The cow voice: "nooooooo" made me laff like a pig.
keep her as interested in flash, as you are, and you two may one day reign supreme over both newgrounds and a pile of chocolate (On a throne of explosion of course). Great work, Sari, you've got a lovely voice for acting and I'm sure you can draw circles around your bro too. I hope you guys keep making collaborations --more goofy sibling stories.
That was awesome! I see no fault in this animation :)
All points you you!
and that's good animated movie, has story, good characters and it's funny :) that's what we want to see on newgrounds!