Well although the quality is sub par and the style is that of a middle school student, I still enjoyed the flash! Some are given more talent than others so I won't lower your rating on not being top tier. Keep up the hard work and keep on improving!
Reviews for "Bridge Fight"
bocodamondo responds:
of course "hands down"
This is the corniest thing I've ever seen in my life.
I hated it. I hate the cheese.
Everything about it needs work.
Storyline, animation, sound, and all.
Like I said. Needs work, and lots of it.
The animation wasn't really good, the voices sounded weird & the footprints were off sounding too. Don't fret though, you'll get better w/ practice. It wasn't the worst flash I've seen.
Coming from an animation stand point this is terrible, there are many MANY things you need to drastically improve. First of all your anatomy needs some serious improving, the preportions are all over the place, I recommend going on devient art and finding some tutorials. Secondly the tweenimation makes me cringe when looking at it, the terrible walk cycle and moving symbols are just ugly. There many things that need to be improved, The voice acting wasn't terrible but it wasn't really good either. I am not trying to rag on you or anything, I am criticizing you so you can become better. I have seen your old stuff and you have improved a lot but there is still a long way to go. Also don't use gradients when coloring.
bocodamondo responds:
First: watch out befor you talk: i allready have an DA account and its 2 years old AND ACTIVE http://bocodamondo.deviantart.com
Second: there was only 3 oder 4 tweens and ENTIRE rest FBF and you guys still directly fall into those little ones??! watch my last flash "Dora vS SWIPER" wich is ONLY tweens! to know how terrible it really is and besides thers a billion populare artitst who DOING ONLY twenns.. like the creator of madness serie. and nobody complains about them if there have to much tweens
Third: ok i know you trying to critize me! and its fine i accept it. but first you have to know all infos before you ends up with a useless review wich i allready have all solutions for it
im just saiyn :C
Good ... for a middle school kid.
bocodamondo responds:
hohoho tough words! then go ahead and make it better! i would love too see it >:C