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Reviews for "Tales of Zale"

It's not so bad.

I can't criticise your animation (because I'm not able to do thing like that) but I have at least one advice to give you : Your drawnstyle for your backgrounds is a bit weak. Your perspectives are wrong and the style doesn't fit with your characters.

It's a good start for a 16 year old, it's true, but think of what I said, I realy think you could do better.

Keep it up and practice

nice just needs some work and bazam itss great
a little tree hugery the world was made for humans.

Well, It's sorta ok....Just like nexusX, I was distracted by something shiny...so i'm sorry I couldn't finish it....

Not bad, I think you could improve it a lot with some small changes.

-Run cycles will go faster with fewer frames. When the fox is running away from the owl, remove half of the frames in the cycle and it'll look like he's going faster.
-Try bending the legs more when you're doing run cycles in profile. Don't be afraid to put some squash and stretch in there too, I know that a lot of squash and stretch can make things look cartoony, but without enough things will look a bit stiff.
-There might be a little too much dead space in there, try to remove some frames here and there to tighten it up on the whole! You'd be surprised, tighter timing can make a huge difference with the energy level on the whole.

Also... did that fox learn English from watching anime dubs? Hahaha sorry, it's just something about the inflection, feels like it has been localized!

Animation wasn't bad at all. I like the simplicity of it. I have a thing for foxes and talking animals so you definitely caught my interest there.

The only realy problem I had was the voice acting. It wasn't bad but it could always be better.

Either way, a job done sufficiently well.