im not too happy with the story to be honest, having seen the video and your explaination about what represents what, i find it a bit shortsighted. it basically says that everything will betray you, including people that love you and your family, EXCEPT JEZUS. im not religous myself, but i find it hard to believe that even people that believe in jezus would not be offended by this message.
i like the animation, and the voiceover actually complimented the animation style well. but the message this story tries to tell is a horrible one, and anyone who REALLY believes like that needs to take a step back and consider that they might be a extremist