Sorry dude but there was no real haha in this. The animation was good and the sound was passable but the "joke" isn't complete. You've got the set-up but only part of the punchline. Without that last bit, the animation falls flat.
Reviews for "Fenada 001"
don't know if this is based on some anime or such but I just remember something similar happen in several anime series ,nice job want to see more.
First of all, the animation was decent. It wasn't anything special, but it got the job done.
Voice acting was a bit sub-par. I could hear some background noise that really didn't have any purpose being there.
Lastly, as far as humor goes, I've seen better jokes on the back of Laffy Taffy wrappers. The concept had promising potential, it just wasn't fleshed out enough. Even if this is supposed to be a short character introduction, that's no excuse for lazy writing. The situation could have been hilarious- clumsy, innocent guy and overly suspicious girl in bed together. I mean, come on! You could have done so much more with that.
I give you three stars.
Entertaining and amusing
Ok so i found this flash to be pretty interesting and slightly entertaining, its one of those flash pieces thats grabs your attention and keeps you there, i like the style and direction you took with this, anyways great start to a decent flash. So there was not much of a story but with how you presented it i guess there was no need, but it was pretty entertaining, it was kind of on the short side, so maybe make it longer with abit more content next time, but overall this was a pretty good tune, not too much to add, except adding more to it but not by much, but great flash i really enjoyed it, heep up the hard work, as i know these flash types and styles can take time.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So things to improve on its always hard to improve on every little thing but. there could be some small improvments here and there, so i took a little time to maybe help and improve on this, below are one or two suggestions that i hope can make things better for all. So for this flash works i thought there could be more "CONTENT" maybe make it longer since it was kind of short, other then that it was a pretty solid tune.
That was funny.