Good concept
I really like the concept. The story line needs work, and the gameplay needs to be tweaked. Add more levels, blah, blah, blah. I don't worry so much about the artwork. That all comes in due time. In the follow up spend more time on the gameplay attributes than the story line.
Thank you for this valuable feedback :)
Flat World?
Somebodies ben reading. The last scene was a cop out and made me feel like dying is gonna be my only chance for escape, but over all this was a great idea executed rather well. Art comes with more time and dedication, so visually speaking this was a good start. Would like to see more games from you.
Thank you :) I sure would like to see more games of me to :D
Hey,
This isn't so bad. I like the story line, and I won't lie, I kinda laughed when the hero went ''x_x''. Anyway, You've got potential. Although you might wanna improve the visuals. And the 3D twisting was kinda annoying. But still, how about a sequel? You could show how much you've improved ( maybe ).
That's golden advice sir! Planning just to do that.
Wow what a cool game
Cool game, Although why didnt you just hire an artist ._. Wouldnt of cost much and would of added value to the game. So 7/10 for the ideas in the game
Thank you for the advice,
I think you are right, I should do that. And Newgrounds looks like the right community for that.
So close
I was so close to loving this game. But then there was the ending. The ending was anti-climatic and frankly, angered me. Reading your responses to other comments though, it looks like you're going to make a sequel, so I hope it'll be good.
Other than that, great graphics, great sound, great gameplay. All of that stuff, I loved.
The ending just really killed it for me.
Thank you for your kind words.
I wanted the story be unusual, and a happy ending didn't satisfy me. So I made it this way. Sorry you didn't like it :(
I will try to make a sequel for sure.