Interesting.
Interesting, I can't wait for the next chapter!
I liked the little bell and the Mad Hatter's hat in the hut-nice homage to your other game.
Interesting.
Interesting, I can't wait for the next chapter!
I liked the little bell and the Mad Hatter's hat in the hut-nice homage to your other game.
Fun, creepy and challanging
Nice, I like this game. It took me about 25 minutes. It was kinda hard though. For those who are stuck, I'll tell you where the machine parts are at the end of this review, only read if you want to ruin the game though...
The scary atmosphere is great. The text that pops up creeps me out (that's a good thing). The music fits. I am looking forward to the third one.
Tips for the third one:
1. Make it longer, it kinda ruins the climax that JUST when something cool is happening, the game stops.
2. Make more obtainable objects, even if they don't help you, it's more fun and adds more depth to the game (mhh I wonder if this item is useful... or not...)
3. Make the texts in the books shorter, this is a personal issue (I don't read very fast and get bored by it easily) either make the texts a little shorter, or make them more interesting.
4. The imp has an annoying voice, if you make a voice, make it fun or creepy but not annoying.
5. Make more animations, I can recall that the only animations are when you obtain the apple, when the shaman is cleaning the table and when you scare the guy with the nail.
6. It was kinda disappointing to have a house filled with cool stuff, only to discover that nothing of that stuff is useful or can be obtained. If you make something like this (I am talking about the shaman's house) let there be at least one object that you can obtain.
That's all, don't get me wrong, I write this to help you improve your game, not to tell you that this game is bad (it isn't).
So overall, good game, fun, creepy and challenging. There are some things that can be improved that make this game weaker than it could have been, but I have faith that you will be able to fix those in the next game. I am looking forward to it.
7 out of 10
I would very much appreciate a response to this review.
*SPOILER ALERT*
For those who can't get any further, here are the machine parts:
1. In the swamp water.
2. Carve open the apple with your knife, inside the apple is "candy" give it to the imp with the nail in his head (why does he have that?)
3. Use your knife as an connector for the metal arm thingy's and trade your hammer with the demon guy.
Thanks for the really detailed and thoughtful feedback. It means a lot to me. you have some good points, I'll take hem to heart.
Amazing, i liked the first one better but this one had a much better inventory and text boxes
the wont work. the door is not opening what am i to do?
does anyone know how to get the candy?