Good tribute
although i wasn't a big fan of that fan fiction, this is still acceptable for a tribute. one thing was pinkie was too fat lol. just make her skinny. other than that, pretty good tribute
Good tribute
although i wasn't a big fan of that fan fiction, this is still acceptable for a tribute. one thing was pinkie was too fat lol. just make her skinny. other than that, pretty good tribute
Weeeeeeelllllllll.
I read the fanfics weeks ago and surprisingly enough, found myself only slightly disturbed in the end (giggled, ironically, at some points of it because it was funny. Eh... perhaps I am just sick.)
I'd say art is... alright, though at parts I thought it could have been better, like when pinkamena pie says "Cupcakes", bloody writing on the floor(?) "Life is a" and the electricity... these were the parts where I started thinking "Well that coulda been done better". Though I am not saying that I could do better! Just saying.
Music fits pretty good for this kind of story. Personally I would have liked some sound effects, such as mad laughter or shouting or hammer hitting the nail, etc.
In short, good work but I was expecting a little better. Still manages to be creepy. Personally favorite part was the smile of Pinkamena Pie, which reminds me of Lesson Zero, where Twilight has a smile like that. I actually am certain that's pretty much the same smile. Which is a good thing.
This probably wouldn't get 7, probably 6 but hey, ponies make everything better!
(Except the damn rule 34...)
3/5, 7/10
>_<...
oh well that sure did remember me some bad memories...(reading cupcakes)
i just had to watch this... idk why... but i had to...
I am disturbed
I've seen scarier things.