you got something here :)
i didn't really get WHERE this story is taking place. like how come people have strange abilities, hope you clear that up in the next ones.
BUT this was really good! the voice acting was really well done, it was natural. not over-acted :D keep it up :3
Almost perfect.
I am really intrigued by this; the animation was nice, although choppy in some bits, the illustrations and characters look really good and the voiceover's weren't too shabby either.
Over all; I hope you're serious about this, because its caught my eye and would like to see you advance the story along with your skills.
Interesting
I liked it and want to see more, but I was kinda confused because it seemed to start in the middle of the story.
LyiteOne, they give themselves away.
Not to be rude but come on LyiteOne, in this day and age you should be able to figure out what these people are. VAMPIRES are supposed to turn into bats, the lady with the neck is familiar with some myth i read some time ago, maybe Japanese? Can't remember right now. Same with the floating umbrella, that's a myth about a spirit inhabiting an umbrella, again i think it's Japanese? The Thunderbird is a mythical creature from Native American myth? Having a hard time remembering where i heard all these myths lol. The others are probably based on a myth or legend as well.
ONTO THE FLASH!
The music fit pretty well, and the animation was good, and the mouth animation stood out as great, the problem is just syncing the voice acting...and getting better quality mics. The story intrigued me and I want to know more about the series.I think the scenes worked out right because honestly, unless there is some epic chase scene who wants to watch the bat fly up to the bird? That would be boring. The characters seem to have fun personalities.
OVERALL: 9/10 because of the syncing and bad mic. 5/5 for an amazing episode 1
great serires
hope to see more in the future, plus use a sponge or some foam on the mic, it helps to filter some noise and get a better sound quality.
yyyyeeeahhh I already did that... It's laughable how this mic behaves actually. thanks for the advice though^^.