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Reviews for "Grey Story"

Feel

I really liked the game, so I decided to leave this passage of text in case you, the author, ever felt like taking a read

Excellent. I really enjoy Hero fading out as the game progressed. what I had expected was for Hero to go from black to white, turning in the last item making him white/transparent. then, we watch the other character do whatev. effectively the same thing

For gameplay, I didn't really notice the slide (tap a directional key and you kind of slide after the movement is complete) until after a few items were returned. not sure if that's an intended effect? it could symbolize losing control

In terms of story, I really like how ambiguous you made this. when I turned in the first item, I detected lots of Feel incoming. rightfully delivered

For music? not sure you could have selected someone better to showcase, for shadow6nothing9 is a fabulous composer. though, for a next title, I suggest multiple tracks that are reactive to the player's placement in the story
I assume the track was not made with the game in mind, thus the song feels out of place, slightly. this is due to length differences, dynamics, tempo, and progression. it still Feels good, but it could Feel better, you Feel me?

Its cute still

so to boil it down ist a person seeking what it cant have no matter the effort, then finding peace in something else?which ever theory its more interesting reading the comments this started. Maybe that was the intention. I dunno XD still I lile the trail effects as you fade away. Good job oi!

A very dull adventure

Hello and this my first review!

Grey story is this boring dull repetitive adventure of a square-head boy trying to help a girl out by giving her items, rubbish storyline isn't it!

The controlls are too basic and the music is too dull

I don't recommend this game even know it's free!

Colors make this game

I love how every time you give the girl a gift it adds color to her world. Unfortunately, for the boy, his part in that was insignificant to her. He desperately try to get her to notice him, but pushes himself farther away in the process.

u all get the story wrong

The boy realized how how abused he was, so after finally pleasing the girl,he believed he did not need that fake love, and went away.
All of you are wrong simply because you want to go deeper than it already is.