Reviews for The Sugar Claws: V-VII

[Knuckstrike]

Haven't seen something like this before.

This is the second flash I've seen from you, and I think it's pretty high quality, and the drawing really improved. The idea is very nice, and it attracts me: I want to read more. Although the story is pretty sober, the drawings were pretty cheerful, so that contrasts nice.

I don't really get the first three pages of the ''book'' though, the ones who are mainly dark blue. They were beautiful, but a bit weird. Could you explain that a bit more? Or is that coming in the next episode?

Maybe, for improvement, you could make something else move in the pictures except for the text. That would make the book pop a little more, and give it something extra. And could you make that you skip to the next page if you press the right/left keys on your keyboard?

Nonetheless the drawings are great, and the story was pretty good too. A bit weird, but not in a negative way.

Celx-Requin responds:

The first three pages are blue because it's a dream sequence, if you read the one prior I think it would have been more apparent.

Thanks,
- Celx

[DreamEater]

Interesting Comic :o

Loved the style you used here, very unique and colorful!
The music you chose was also a pretty nifty addition to this project :D

Wished it would have been longer though?
Maybe consider using more than one song in accordance with the mood of the comic as well?

Just suggestions though :)
Great Effort!
~Dj Sonik

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Celx-Requin responds:

The final release will have one extra piece of music, I want to include more tracks but it's a file size issue.

Thanks,
- Celx

[Soapbubble]

Still love the style

There's not a lot that differs in terms of quality from chapter to chapter. It doesn't really need to.

I've been reading and reviewing a lot of your stuff, and I really think that you've done a seriously amazing job with the storyline, plot and general feel of this story. The atmosphere the story itself is placed in, is created around the reader by use of music and your pretty distinct art style.

There's not much animation, but the graphics are neat and unique. The color palette you used really gets out the contrasts in the story. The music still doesn't loop perfectly, but the sound itself is pretty good.

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Celx-Requin responds:

Cool,
I hope you will drop in for the last release in October!

Thanks,
- Celx

[SkyeWint]

Okay! First review in my 3-hour rush! Let's go!

Ok, it's a tad confusing, but honestly. Nice work! Even without having read the previous ones, this is still really good, and I understood it reasonably well (...I think).

There's a lot of "heavy" content, and you can see the problem with the main character clearly. I thought the beginning was interesting, showing that dragon-like-thing-beast-whatever-it-i s in a world that I can only assume is the mind of the main character. The plot is well-done, thought I'm not exactly sure what made the main character's friend pull the fork out. That and how it actually went alright. I'm also not exactly sure how the main character can talk, considering she (assuming it's a she) has a fork in her throat. /Generally/ people wouldn't be able to talk if there was a fork lodged in their throat. Just saying. The music is nice, fits in well with the comic, and though there isn't much animation, it doesn't need it. It's a comic, not really a movie.

Overall, good plot, good music, good art, good multi-world idea. Hope to see more.

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-SWINT-

Celx-Requin responds:

It ends in October, I'm working on the final Issue today...

Thanks,
- Celx