Decent
The storyline is good, it has a slight bit of humor to it. The audio could be improved a bit but that's not really your fault. Technology isn't perfect. This is pretty amazing for only a second animation. Other than the audio, great job. :)
Decent
The storyline is good, it has a slight bit of humor to it. The audio could be improved a bit but that's not really your fault. Technology isn't perfect. This is pretty amazing for only a second animation. Other than the audio, great job. :)
Overall decent
I'm noticing a kind of black, American Eddsworld thing going on here. Make the shoulders smoother. And polish up the animation, but it was overall pretty good. Oh, and get a new mic, too.
my mic is fine. I just need to know how to export good quality with .swf files.
not bad
could use a little better voice acting, no offense.
Am I really that bad that you deducted 4 points?
This has ass written all over it; Mega Schitt
I strongly dislike your Johnny Test humor