Not the best plot
So it's based around poor interpretation of a French song, making it sound incredibly homosexual, while taking a Madness theme to base yourself around.
I did quite like the pun substituting the gun for the penis and that was probably the best part of the entire piece. Where it starts to fall apart is the length and the way that the animation subtly changes through the piece - you start with very little facial emotion shown for the characters and nearer the end, making him lip-sync is just a step too far, because if he'd have been doing it from the start, you'd have established continuity.
To top it all off, you had a surreal ending. Probably the best way this could have ended, when all's said and done, but you still have a way to go. The animation is a little accomplished, but you need better writing to exploit your talents better.
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