Get some character
that was pretty lifeless animation and the voice acting sounded forced. Did you even like making it?
Reviews for "The Hair"
Um..
You're going to be rated extremely critically from the very beginning because this made front page - so brace yourself for that. Realistically, I have to agree with everyone else: this simply isn't front page material.. The point of this story was that there was a hair in the guy's eye. It was short, the dialogue was awkward, it was gross but not gross enough, and it wasn't as funny as it was trying to be..
Next time, I'd suggest that you go longer, have the guy be a little less calm about the fact that he just pulled his eye out.. (I mean, whoever did the voice didn't match the sense of urgency being expressed by the animation), and put in a bit more of a twist.. I think everyone saw that coming.
And, not that I'm a fan of gratuitous violence and gore, but had he gotten his eye ripped out, there'd be a bit more blood. And since his eye is out, it isn't like there isn't already a substantial amount of gore in it.
umm wow...
i get the humor in this flash...but this is just plain creepy..i felt violated im sorry. you could do better on the animation, you should also improve your voice acting so you dont sound so monotone, add a lil bit of inflexions in future flash's
Bad.
It's really not good. Lacks in almost everything.
hmm
i don't know how to feel about this. the animation was okay. the voice wasn't good though. i think it might have needed to be funnier considering the content. keep trying because the skill is there.