disappoint
I waited for "out here in the forest" song part but it never happened..
Reviews for "Friendship."
funkycaveman responds:
Check the menu again. You may have to look a little bit harder, it's should be more obvious to find now.
It was ok
The art was ok, the story was ok, and the animation was ok. But JUST ok.
funkycaveman responds:
ok.
em, quiestion?
If the guy's got himself a tent, then why is he and his friend ( I think ) be sleeping outside in the rain?
Heartfelt and Dark
Hey funkycaveman,
--Production--
The art was brilliant and the animation amazingly smooth. Considering the time frame required, small lapses such as the weird blowing of the hair in the wind, and the inconsistent looping of the rain sample, are overlooked. You have done great for the time required.
--Experience--
The flash was slow-moving, and emotional, right until the very end. It set up the mood perfectly for the shocking ending, which I believe was apt. The cruelty of the ending was haunting, and raw. However, the pace could have still been improved, since at some points it feels more than achingly slow.
--Style--
The style was emotional and heartfelt, a flash to ponder over rather than critically analyze. It had interesting soulful benefits, such as the examination of a friendship, "the only unsinkable ship". It was very stylish and well presented.
--Wow Factor--
There was a certain wow factor with the slick animation and the wonderful characterisation, but I felt we could have been more intimately involved with the characters. Maybe something outside the montage of specific things they did, like make a fire, going out for a fly, or feeding the bird. That would enhance the relationship even further.
--Personal Tilt--
I liked the forward-thinking nature of this. In the age of egoraptor flashes and "asdfmovie3"s, there doesn't seem much room for thinking movies like this. That's why I like the daring nature of this piece and its willingness to go past the norm. Well done.
--Production-- = 17/20
--Experience-- = 19/20
--Style-- = 14/20
--Wow Factor-- = 13/20
--Personal Tilt-- = 14/20
OVERALL SCORE: 77/100
Benjamin
--REVIEW REQUEST CLUB--
funkycaveman responds:
Thanks for the review. You clearly understand the difficulties of animating something with only 48 hours to do so. We will take all of your comments into consideration, this will improve future flashes created by use, as part of a team or not.
Good
Haha great animation skills and story, I also liked my song's Cameo.