Amazingly beautiful, but....
I'm completly shocked by the great art and background and the fine animation. I do however fail to see the great point in the, uuuh, don't have the right word, 'story' (I just say that). It was too prodictable. Though, I must say it's good since you only spend 30 sec thinking about it.
A longer animation, and you can be sure to get top 10 from me! :)
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thanks! Im working on a longer one
Ups and Downs
I like your actual animation, and the art was unique and realistic, but there was absolutely no point. Usually, when you watch a flash, you expect some sort of a plot or a moral, or at least a point (to make people laugh, to make people rethink things, etc), but you animation did not show that. As I said, the art is amazing overall, but your next flash should concentrate more on the actual point of the flash. I gave you a 4/5 because of the art and animation and the general effort. Keep it up.
More please :-)
This is a great flash, no doubt about it ;-)
I love the art style and all.
But, you know, it makes you YEARN for MORE! :D
Hopefully you got a swell grade for the assignment ;-)
Not bad, but certainly not memorable.
The artwork, especially the backgrounds, were well-drawn. The animation, though (the people for example) was not altogether notable. For a 30-second school project, it was decent, but the joke was simple and the idea was portrayed ineffectively. It was still an OK attempt, I certainly wouldn't say it was terrible, but I think you should make more videos and you will become more talented.
Well
It Was A Good Animation But I Wouldn't Class It As Funny So Overall You Get 6 For Animation And 1 For Comedy