Nice-
artwork, bad voice rec. Kinda ruined it for me
Reviews for "The Chaos Emerald King"
smeh
sounding like it was made by a five year old but still good
not bad my friend
However, I think you could use a little work on your rhyme scheme.
-When I do I will proclaim. Sonic you have lost this game.
-Eggman's plans all seem quite flawed. They make me sigh and say, "oh god."
-Should be easy I can say. Send his sorry butt away.
I know the last one purposely didn't rhyme, but honestly it doesn't work in the sense that you read the word "heck" before he sings it. It just feels played out in my humble opinion. Please take what I say in no way offensive. I am just offering a little friendly advice. Keep up the good work.
Well...................
The story was good, but the music was just plain awful.
no rythem (well a no good one..)
off and some lines in the video dont even rhyme