It's beautiful
it's like listening to a choir of disorganized first graders.
Reviews for "The Chaos Emerald King"
Peda responds:
lol. I really did want eggman to seem that way! He's the only one that couldn't sing!
Nice-
artwork, bad voice rec. Kinda ruined it for me
Well...
I liked the lyrics and the comic styled layout. But the singing.... Meh...
not bad my friend
However, I think you could use a little work on your rhyme scheme.
-When I do I will proclaim. Sonic you have lost this game.
-Eggman's plans all seem quite flawed. They make me sigh and say, "oh god."
-Should be easy I can say. Send his sorry butt away.
I know the last one purposely didn't rhyme, but honestly it doesn't work in the sense that you read the word "heck" before he sings it. It just feels played out in my humble opinion. Please take what I say in no way offensive. I am just offering a little friendly advice. Keep up the good work.
Well...................
The story was good, but the music was just plain awful.