Great
I saw the original working animatic you posted on the forums and liked it, this is even better. I def. think the scenes progress and transition a lot better than before. I like the final version of the building/sun-scape, and the last view of the character before the end. I'm glad that you did not follow that persons (moronic) advice to remove the shackle bit, it adds depth and clearly defines the animation.
Overall, I liked it, and I'm even inspired by it. Great job.