Id love to see this as a movie :D
You make it seem so perfect, as if its ment to be on a big screen, if you would ever do that, i would watch it the second it came out.
Reviews for "An Unfortunate Girl:ONE"
Wow
That was very intresting.
Good, but has room for improvement
The ideas and plot were pretty fresh and interesting. I like the way Karissa's eyes are empty, since as a protagonist you're supposed to be relating to her, but the way she looks makes her seem a bit different.
The timeline was a little difficult to follow, though. Even though there was the "3 days earlier" thing, it was kind of impossible to tell what was a flashback and what was actually happening in the present.
I also spotted some contradictions. She talks about only having one friend and says, "Why would anyone want more than one friend?" and then she calls the worms her 'friends', implying that she does have more than one. I think 'guardians' or 'protectors' would've been a better word for them.
Also, for a town where it always rains, it sure doesn't rain a lot (didn't rain in some scenes). It kind of breaks the atmosphere that was set up at the beginning.
I'm looking forward to watching this and seeing how it progresses.
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Wow, it's totaly awesome! The voice of the girl, it just applies greatly for this whole story! 10, for sure! Hope to see more, even though you're a slow animator, as you sad. Good luck! =)
Strong effort. Scary and strange.
Decent voice-acting (I mean, it never grates or detracts from the experience) and fine visuals.
A grim premise used well.