Portal... but harder and not as fun
You clearly tried to take a lot from Portal, and that is commendable - but you need to make your intention less clear. Also, some puzzles were far too hard. Difficulty levels would be nice.
Reviews for "My First Quantum Translocator"
sorry
its not my type
I can't stand it anymore!
This is a good game. There's some clever and even slightly original level design here. But I quit in disgust and I won't go back. I just. Can't. TAKE the carbon copy portal plot anymore. Hell, I've never even played the actual game Portal, but there are so many Flash games now with this exact plot. Some of them put clever, enjoyable spins on it, like Depict1, but here I was literally grinding my teeth as I anticipated each COMPLETELY predictable element of the "story" and it showed up right on time. I don't expect a lot out of a flash game story; hell, even reusing this now VERY tired bit wouldn't bother me if you put SOMETHING unpredictable into it... Sheesh.
wtf
how the hell do you get past training?????!!!!!!!
Not the best, but not the worst.
The game is overall decent. A Few things I'd like to make note of:
-Laggy controls
-Way too much precision required for landings
-extremely comparable to that of "time fcuk"
However, here's my ratings:
GENERAL RATINGS:
Art: 7/10
-Art is existent and a bit detailed, but bland.
Gameplay: 5/10
-Very frustrating, too small of a jump for some things. Seems like certain jump landings are flukes.
Music: 6/10
-Music is interesting at first but can become irritating after enough time
OVERALL RATING: 6/10