Garbage
Well, it was something. Not a good something, but a something. If you're going to post on the Flash Portal you have to think it'll actually make it past BLAMS. Next time you post something please put more work into it because it will show and a lot more people will enjoy watch it.
>.<
just another stickman flash
and a very lousy one at that.
you should seriously improve the length and graphics, half of the time there wasn't even a background. Step up your game.
Constructive Criticism
Animation 0/5
PAINT? YOU GOT TO BE KIDDING ME! Microsoft Paint?
That is crazy talk, use real flash! MS paint is banned from newgrounds!
Fighting 0/5
Wow, 4 seconds of fighting and about 30 seconds of funeral?
Goal: Add at least 20 more seconds of fighting for a 1
Quality and Quantity: 0000.1/5
You sure put no quality to the fight, but loads of quantity at the funeral?
Goal: Try to even them out for a 1
Stickmen: 0/5
Sorry stickmen aren't suppost to be on newgrounds, its just another one of there rules, sorry!
Goal: Don't use stickmen
Background design and music: 0/5
At least put some sky, or some sad music for the funeral.
Goal: Don't use ms paint at all, dont use pivot! use a professional animation with original characters for a 1.4
Rating: Horrible!!!
I am not using paint U idiot im using adobe flash cs5