ok..
it was kinda good for your third :)
Reviews for "My third short flash anim"
:@ mariogamer2010
@mariogamer2010 that was harsh and stick animations arent banned from newgrounds there are thousands of high scoring stick submittions and mspaint is not banned either inface 90% of game logos on newgrounds were quickly edited in from printscreen in ms paint including tom fulps ! oh and i see you have submitted art and music but its hard for you to critisize a flash animtion if you have no idea of how mlong it takes to make even a small stick toon so hopefull in your next review youll be more constuctive
anyway i think this submittion was a bit bland but my 3rd flash animation was a few squiggles and a total fail so its not too bad but improvement would be good ~ all the best
nice attempt
i understand its your third flash and you seem to have a decent grasp on animating what i suggest is that you dont upload everything you make as people will start to ignor you and your work maybe do some tests to see what types of thing you can add in try different forms like sprite animation or enanimate animation to see if you can pick yourself a style but overall rather good for your 3rd :D
Theuberkilla responds:
Thanks for that =]
I have seen worse
To be your third flash, this isn't so bad. You got alot to work on though. The fighting at the beginning is short and i can see that you got the combo from Hyun's stickfigure-tutorial. Try to be more original.
The sticks wobble alot too. Practise more before posting anything here again.
Theuberkilla responds:
Ok thanks
really not bad!
to mariogamer2010: that wasn't constructive, but hateful. If you said it to me, I would never make a flash movie again.
I liked the fight, but mariogamer2010 was right, you should make it longer.
For the 3rd time, this i great, but don't forget to finish your work.
I missed the: sounds, backgrounds, more detialed characters, objects.
Keep it up!
That was a "Constructive Criticism". -.-'