Reviews for cherry blossoms

[Sneakers]

Wow...amazing flash

I thought it was very well done, and intresting...though was slow at start...but enjoyed the style of the animation. couple suggestions though.

1. music would do wonders...cause when it's quiet...it makes it dull...even some soft overture, or celtic music, like Enya,...something that would fit the overall theme of the movie.

2. most importantly...the colour of the text and the font. alot of the text was illegable...as the colour ever was simular to the background...or the background colour overpowered the text.

Good work.

[Subdepth]

Hey, good work here...

...That was your first flash? Very well done, man. I like your style. I think the fact that its silent lends sincerity to the poem. Look forward to seeing more from you. Good work!

[zonrox]

FUck you A-lex

the movie was cool. obviously that guy A-lex didn't know quality. CUT THE GUY SOME FUCKING SLACK MAN! it was his first flash movie! dumbass.
besides, i never saw you make a flash movie...
make one before judge badly of others!

and oh yeah, asshair, it's Bob Marley and The WAILERS not WHALERS stupid. it's favorite band and you don't even know the correct spelling? are you even human?

anyway, PINOY PRIDE! putang ina ninyo mga kano! ang baho nyo!

nice job, blue raven.

[Heiwanoken]

Beautiful, but you need some work...

I think I will never see something as beautiful as a tree... er, as a cherry blossom.... Well assuming that Robert Frost forgives you I think the poem and the way you presented it was nice and original and you have some incredible artistic talent there that needs some polishing.

It does need some audio. My ears were aching from the lack of sound but some simple audio track that fits the mood of the poem should be used. In addition to this without having much experience with flash you might want to be careful I could barely read the text in some places. It went by too fast.

Aside from the above mentioned things I think this is a marvolous work for a first flash. I see a lot of potential in you that I do not want to see go to waste. Please improve this! And that girl in the movie was cute! was that supposed to be you!?

[SadakoYamamura]

I have to say it was missing a lot.

But I definitely liked it. Didn't really understand it, didn't really need to. Beautiful art, great poetry. Soft background music would have been fitting, but I can't argue with a creator's decisions of silence v.s. background.

As stated by the previous reviewer, Daisysantulips, the text was -often- too lightly coloured to see. I would fix this by looking through and picking out those spots, then choosing darker colours like navy blue, forest green and velvet purple, to match the mainly pink-and-red tints and hues in the movie.

Remember, colours set off the feeling of your flash works, which is why that is always important - use the right colours. Gentle music can add to this feeling... It could start of soothing and end sadly, as the poem did.

Other than these, I have no more suggestions for you, except make another as amazing as this.