It was Good.
very good graphics and ur drawing is sweet, but it IS boring. You can do a really nice looking Flash next time, make a flash that makes sense.
Overall, it was good.
It was Good.
very good graphics and ur drawing is sweet, but it IS boring. You can do a really nice looking Flash next time, make a flash that makes sense.
Overall, it was good.
sweet
sweet dude, work harder to get the effect that you want. for a first timer that was sweet! good luck on other flash projects...
Well drawn filled with emotion
Very emotional flash. I can see you're really trying to convey a feeling and a thought through these pictures and words. I think you could have enhanced the flash experience with some background sound...nothing too big to ruin to flash itself but something as simple as maybe wind blowing. A tiny bit of sound goes a long way~!
Nice Work
you are really good first timer, i hope you dont lose touch with your syle it was nice as hell i look forward to your future work
nice work
that was good sound would have helped hard to read the poem at times but it was still good i liked it keep up the good work