no...
to short bro... make a longer one and with beter quality... and it will be ok... try to get more time and frames per seconds (practice the gravity effects to... the power effect AND the other effects) I wish you good luck its not easy but you have to work... you may can use some programs like pivo to train yourself...
God I hated pivot though...
Not bad.
I think you should make it longer, at least a couple minutes, but other than that, this was pretty good.
ya im planning on that. if you saw what i put in the authors comments box, its just the like demo if you will. its gonna be a good 5 minutes long instead of tis 25 seconds or so, i just wanted some input and recommendations fro the rest of the video. thanks