Nice work
I like it for the most part. I dont rly like how that 1 dude shoots himself but w/e. im looking forward to the full version
Reviews for "Yes, Another Stick Fight!"
Good start
Overall good trailer, it is very promising overall
Nice Trailer
You know, Newgrounds has sound effects in the Audio Section should go check that out for gunshots, Other then that TridonWolf covered up any faults in there. Good luck.
L0n3c0mrad responds:
ive been a member of newgrounds for like years and never knew that.... thanks :/
im sorry if this is harsh
im a huuuuuge fan of stick fights this is okay as a start but there is alot of problems...
-speed it up (i dont know if it was your reasoning for being so slow but thought i would mention it just in case)
- zoom in to the main character make us guess how large the area is
- SFX for the hits with screen rattling gun shots and big fights
- more people (its ok if there is 10,000 random mooks [of course i dont expect that number just a large number] that die with one hit but it adds to how EPIC your main guy is)
look at stuff for the castle series to see some great stick figure animations (not advertising)
i hope for the best
L0n3c0mrad responds:
Thanks. this is the exact kind of feedback i was hopeing for. ya i had it at 11 fps, i know thats like none, but its a real bitch doin the frame by frame flashes at like 20 or 15. i might do around 16 fps on the final one. and ya ill have sfx for the final, im having a hard time finding ones that work with each other is all. plus its not just gonna be in this one room. its going to span all over the place. again, thanks for the input bro. i appreciate it
Nice
I like the style dude! Keep up the good workz.
L0n3c0mrad responds:
Thanks man :). By th end of th summer I'll have the full length film up.