A solid start
I like how you do your animations. However, they could go a little smoother and sound would greatly assist the flash. Still, a good piece of work for a first flash.
Reviews for "My First Gears of Madness"
ahhhh! too fast
my brain pretty much exploded from the break neck speed of this thing. but from what i saw, i can say you have a good start. slow it down by half, add some sound. (gunfire, explosions, monster noises and BGM), and then add more to the story. you could probably use an introduction somewhere to set up what we're about to see. but hey, for your first animation, its not bad. keep working at it. i mean, Gears of Madness is a pretty badass idea. with a little work, the actual thing could be equally badass.
Not bad, room for improvement
I must say that wasn't to bad for a first flash, I enjoyed the idea of Gears Of War mixed with Madness. Improve a little on the detail , deaths and don't quite make it so fast, also add some sound effects and background music & it should be alot better. 3/5 5/10
You've got Potential
While I think that you have some potential, you will need to add sound, length, and more plot to your videos even if the plot is incredibly simple.
No Sound
Would have been much improved with even basic sound effects. It could flow a little better, not as fast, make the little text easier to read when the characters are "talking" maybe make it bigger