Keep it up
Not bad for your first mate, It felt very rushed, each little scene flew by. Also the complete lack of audio didnt help. Take your time with the next one and put some effort into music/sound effects, Gunshots etc.
Reviews for "My First Gears of Madness"
Its a good start.
Your flash went by a little too fast. You should try to make the objects move smotthly instead of appearing here then appearing there. More effort needs to be put into animation, though you did an ok job with the art. Keep going.
~Depes Crystalline~
You've got Potential
While I think that you have some potential, you will need to add sound, length, and more plot to your videos even if the plot is incredibly simple.
No not really.
I guess it was good for your first flash. I mean it wasn't awful like crap most people submit but it wasn't exactly good either. I mean a major part of any flash submission is sound/music and your lack of that makes it....well not as good.
No Sound
Would have been much improved with even basic sound effects. It could flow a little better, not as fast, make the little text easier to read when the characters are "talking" maybe make it bigger