Flat
A spider and a web, people hanging on strings above the pit - yeah, how original.
Looks like a piece of Soviet propaganda of the 1960's.
Nicely drawn, though.
Reviews for "Jesus Who?"
Creepy
Short, but nice art. You can draw well enough. Not really sure what the message is supposed to be. It's too ambiguous.
well, the hands are well-drawn
It's a good thing you escaped your shallow high school culture of materialism, conformity, and hedonism (clearly represented in the spider) and found freedom in Jesus and His message (clearly represented by you "letting go" of your former dead-end life).
Unless you wanted it to be an angsty teen art movie, then...
yeah, that's about all i can get out of this. Like I said, the hands are well drawn, and I think the body falling to the ground was done nicely. As well, I think you clearly know how to animate (and draw human anatomy!) and that is more than what i can say for 99% of the site...
But even with all that, this was not very fun nor intellectually stimulating -for me- to watch, sorry. It's just not very lively.
I'm sure for school, it'll be more than good, though.