Its nice
the only thing i can comment on is that in the beginning of this song when you get to your low strings are a little repetative, if you varied it i'm sure the quality of this would go up dramaticly.
I really do enjoy your use of the full range of strings. :) good job
yeah, i think so too.
Truly sad
Hey there Medieval7.
Lets jump right into the song. I found the beginning was a little too boring. The fun really begun at 0:50 where that violin melody kicks in. All of it leading up to this part takes a bit too long. I consider 30 seconds being the rule of thumb before you should change or add things to the melody.
Lovely work with that choir.
I felt the sudden melody change at 2:00 was a very interesting twist, and could have been handled differently. It was a little too abrupt, changing from the slow, painful melody to a hyper depressed kind of feel.
Putting all that aside, I really liked your melody again. It seems i'm enjoying your melody work a great deal, I don't know why, I just like them a good deal.
4/5 from me Medieval7, keep them coming man. I won't be around NG much, so i'll be writing a few reviews here, trying to be as critical and constructive as possible.
ok, thanks for your review
cool
not amazing, but not half bad dude. it was kind of mass or jumbled chords for a lot of it. then the (violin) idk my speakers r gay solo comes in. the chorus was very :airy, but that cant be helped. cool song. i liked the melody at 2:05. pretty well developed n all. hmmm. i didnt like the ending...o well. it just uhh.......ended. w/e