Excellent!
Has great style and good quality!There would be some improvements bu that was good!
You have talent sir i give you that
Reviews for "Solar City"
Change the Dialogue
If this is the only human civilization left, I think it would be too small for the government to deceive easily; why does the government bother claiming that drafted people "volunteered"? It seems more believable to me that they would get the notice and tell their families the truth; either that, or they go missing in the middle of their day. They're neither convicts nor ghetto residents: they all have unique clothes which aren't threadbare. I think it would be more realistic if they are drafted and know it. The regime is desperate enough, I think it could function that way.
The action is great. Because the animation is so short, there is infinite flexibility for the reason why those people are captive and why the hero is saving them. What was that, 25 seconds of dialogue? You could change that to anything.
I like your drawing and the music sets an excited mood. Your execution is solid, it's just the story that I feel needs work.
Lythero responds:
Very good point. I'll try and mix around with reasons of as to how/why people are getting kidnapped exactly.
mhmm..
nice concept but too short, and why isn't that guy fighting the creatures....I don't rly have a good idea whats really going on, but for the most part...
but yeah, good though, just make it a lil longer to explain more of the plot
Meh
The plot has some potential, but it was barely explored at all. At this rate it would take like 10 episodes to actually get anywhere. Animation was decent, but the sound... well, you really gotta work on the voice man. The recording quality is poor and your speech could use improvement.
alright
Your animation and drawing are okay, but the voice acting and story really drag it down. The story has really been done to death.